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The Kiwi Dragon
09-18-2012, 12:42 PM
OK I wrote this a long time ago when I was feeling rather homesick after living here for 2 years.
Before anyone asks, Yes I can sing, no I can't play an imstrument so yeah.
It's not great as it is my first, you can say it's crap if you want I appreciate honesty.


* *TAKE ME HOME:

I won't be told no more.
That I am of way too distant.
Like waves flowing off the shore.

Let those whom destroy my soul.
Lest they someday grow old.
And free them unto God so they know.
It can never be too late.

If they ever found it was true.
That they had the power to choose.
Free of all the shackles and chains.
We are all together.

No, I won't be told no more.
That I am of way too distant.
Like waves flowing off the shore.

Just let me find my way back.
Trying to go home.
Put my life back on track.

Those who tell me off for seeing what I've seen.
Are so typical of themselves.
As they themselves can only dream.

When your living your life as a lie.
Sometimes you just go on to fly.
Some just go forth to die.

No, I won't be told no more.
That I am of way too distant.
Like waves flowing off the shore.

Look into the eyes of a Northern girl.
As they lead you to a different world.
As your life is completely unfurled.

Things get worse day by day.
So you've got to get rougher and tougher.
In the jungle of life where we play.

Where everything is wanted for free.
Like as if they want for nothing.
As they dance onto their knees.

I won't be told no more.
That I am of way too distant.
Like waves flowing off the shore.

Take me home.

Pikachu Belle
09-18-2012, 02:59 PM
so perf and amazing u.u

DarkCloud7
09-18-2012, 08:36 PM
Great lyrics. Do you mind if I put that to chords? I play guitar and sing, so I maybe could make a song out of this.

truffledude12
09-18-2012, 11:13 PM
beautiful

The Kiwi Dragon
09-19-2012, 01:10 AM
Great lyrics. Do you mind if I put that to chords? I play guitar and sing, so I maybe could make a song out of this.

Go ahead man... I am only a mere singer, no guitarist. Help yourself! :)
1 request though just that the credit goes to me for writing it.

UltraSound
09-19-2012, 06:43 PM
This is awesome! :3 Well done Razer! How inspiring.

Georgia
10-28-2013, 07:23 AM
Wow! Honey this is beautiful, I never new you had wrote song until now. :* :)

Cthulhu
10-29-2013, 08:22 AM
Amazing. Simply amazing.