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Pikachu2000
10-24-2012, 04:35 PM
"Uh where am i" .................. "hey blaze???? you just got powned by White kyrem " it had been a long day for blaze fighting for suvival in the world that had turned crule for pokes with white kyrem taking over. later on the mystery pokemon known as victini had healed blaze by using the power it had. "thanks vic i almost was sent to my grave!" said blaze hapily "vic"vic vic" blaze turned around .............. victini was on the floor in a heap ....... "kyrem il get you for this"




Next part coming very soon!


yours truley torhick01

pikachu4
10-24-2012, 04:39 PM
ok i am not really getting this please explain

Pikachu2000
10-24-2012, 04:42 PM
ok i am not really getting this please explain

its a story it'll be explained later in da story

The Kiwi Dragon
10-24-2012, 07:13 PM
Erm... You kinda need longer parts to the the story... and it needs to be descriptive...

Pikachu2000
10-25-2012, 04:11 PM
scince some peeps are rude bout this my story is ova

pikachu4
10-25-2012, 04:43 PM
we aren't being rude we are just giving you advice geez

The Kiwi Dragon
10-26-2012, 04:59 AM
scince some peeps are rude bout this my story is ova

Yes you are being OTT about it Jack. We are giving advice you're the one throwing it back at us!

The Kiwi Dragon
10-26-2012, 08:06 PM
You gonna have critics all through life... but I'm sorry what we said was true...