Pikachu2000
11-24-2012, 09:10 PM
Hey guys since my last story didn't work out as good as I hoped, I'm going to try to get my good writing image back!
Mew does speak in human language. That's how my story goes.
"Ugh,worst sleep ever," I had said in discomfort. looking at the sunrise, which had taken my mind off the sleepless night I had before.
"Hey,Mew! How are you? Still trying to take down Evil, I see" said my best buddy, Victini.
"Well Vic, I'm taking time off to play. Come on lets go to the park!"
At
the park
"Lets go down the slide," Vic had said, in that happy upbeat mood that she was in.
"Do we have to? I wanna go on he swings!" I had said, whilst flying up to the top.
"Weeeeeeeee!" said Vic, sliding down the slide.
"Oh boy. I hate slides, but here goes...AHHHHHHHHH! I'M AS SCARED AS A LONE PIKACHU TAKING ON THE WORLD" I was screaming on the way down.
~PING~
It was my Pokemon mobile.
"Oh,Vic, it's urgent" I said.
"Don't go please" said Vic, begging me. It was obvious she had feelings for me.
"I have to teleport to the base. See ya later!"
I then teleported to the base...
So Leave comments on how to improve! Until next time Yours Awesomely Torhick01!
Mew does speak in human language. That's how my story goes.
"Ugh,worst sleep ever," I had said in discomfort. looking at the sunrise, which had taken my mind off the sleepless night I had before.
"Hey,Mew! How are you? Still trying to take down Evil, I see" said my best buddy, Victini.
"Well Vic, I'm taking time off to play. Come on lets go to the park!"
At
the park
"Lets go down the slide," Vic had said, in that happy upbeat mood that she was in.
"Do we have to? I wanna go on he swings!" I had said, whilst flying up to the top.
"Weeeeeeeee!" said Vic, sliding down the slide.
"Oh boy. I hate slides, but here goes...AHHHHHHHHH! I'M AS SCARED AS A LONE PIKACHU TAKING ON THE WORLD" I was screaming on the way down.
~PING~
It was my Pokemon mobile.
"Oh,Vic, it's urgent" I said.
"Don't go please" said Vic, begging me. It was obvious she had feelings for me.
"I have to teleport to the base. See ya later!"
I then teleported to the base...
So Leave comments on how to improve! Until next time Yours Awesomely Torhick01!