Matthewm9
12-06-2012, 09:21 AM
Chapter 1: The Egg
I woke up to a gentle licking on my face. “Get down girl,” I said as I looked at my alarm clock. My vision is blurry from me just waking up as usual. I think my alarm says 10:00 so it’s not too late. I was worried I’d wake up late, I couldn't sleep last night and not just because I’m an insomniac, no today was something more than a kid’s average day. Today was the day that marks my status as a trainer because it’s my 10th birthday and I am finally able to get my first Pokemon!
I looked at my clock again and did a double take, “1:00! No, no, no this can’t be right!” I slung the covers off my bed not knowing Poochy, our Poochyena was still there, throwing her off the bed along with the covers. A yelp came from Poochy when she hit the ground. “Are you okay Pooch? I would never do something like that on purpose.” Poochy couldn’t talk because she was still a baby. I placed her on my bed and swiftly ran to my dresser, changed clothes and ran downstairs with Pooch on my tail.
I got to the bottom of the wooden steps and made my way to the kitchen. What a surprise… the kitchen is full of my friends and family. I sat down at the table while my mom got her camera. “Please no mom.” There is nothing I hate more than having my picture taken. “Let me get one picture then you will get your pokemon,” mom said.
“Fine”The picture was taken and from behind her back was something weird. It wasn’t a pokeball and it wasn’t a pokemon. Jonney and Kyle, my two friends, knew what it was yet I didn’t. “Wait is that a pokemon egg?”
“Yes and until it hatches you can’t leave on your journey, you can’t have an egg use bite,” She said with a smile. I thought my journey to be a champion was supposed to start today, but apparently she can’t let go of me that easy. I grabbed the egg and smiled, “I don’t know who you are but I love you… unless you’re a Dunsparce.” My mom shot me a dirty look and we got ready for the other gifts which were 2 pokeballs, a great ball, a bag, and a Poketech.
“What do you think it is Teddy,”Kyle said as he got his cake.
“Maybe Riolu or Zorua, it could be almost anything and I would be happy!” After cake Jonney, Kyle and I went to my room while our parents whispered, don’t ask me what they were talking about but I hope they aren’t talking about what the pokemon in the shiny egg is because I have ears like a Braviary. “So Kyle, what’s your secret Pokemon you said you got?”
“Teddy, so impatient, wait until our first battle”
“Jonney, why not introduce your friend to the egg?”
“I don’t see why not!” Jonny reached into his pocket and pulled out a pokeball with blue flames painted on it, pressed the button with his thumb. Kyle and I covered our eyes as a blinding light filled the room. Once the light died down we saw Jonney’s victini jumping on the bed and using his tiny wings to glide back down. “Hi Teddy! Kyle!” “Hi Victini! Want to battle,” I asked. Victini nodded and I ran downstairs to my mom.
“Mom! Can I use Poochie in a battle against Jonny and Victini?”
“Poochie are you up to it?” She nodded and we went out the back door to our battlefield.
Kyle offered to be the referee and we started the battle.
Jonny: Victini your up!
Poochy, win this!
Your move Jonney
Jonny: “Victini Headbutt!”
Victini moved in closer as I called for Poochy to use double team. Poochy did as I said but Victini still hit Poochie. (How?) I then remembered that victini was part psychic, it can sense the phony.
Poochy! Toxic!
The sludge hit Victini.
Jonny: So you want to play like that huh? Will-O-Wisp! Now we both have a condition, and must I remind you that your attack is halved while burned?
Grr I didn’t know Victini knew that move.
Jonny: Façade Victini!
“Dude, that’s weak! Quick attack Poochy!”
Victini’s Façade dealt even more damage due to the speed that they collided at.
Jonny: and with that burn it also does twice the damage.
(What?! I forgot about that! How could I be so stupid?)
Kyle: Poochyena is unable to battle, Victini wins this match!
“Good game Jonny, but remember, you have been a trainer longer than me.”
“Why can’t you just let me enjoy my win?” The three of us stopped by the kitchen on the way to my room. “Kyle, I left you something on Matthew’s bed, I think you will want it. It’s also keeping the egg warm.”
“Thanks mom.” ”I hope it isn’t a thunderstone. They make my hair stand up.” With Kyle’s long hair it doesn’t take much electricity to make it spike up. Kyle dashed ahead of us and made it to my room before Jonny and I made it to the first step of the staircase. “What is it?” Jonny was about as excited as Kyle but doesn’t run much.
“A-a-a Firestone. I have a book Evolutionary items lemme look it up.”
“A Firestone can evolve Pokemon: Growlithe, Vulpix, Pansear, and Eevee,” Jonny acts like he knows everything and tries to prove it when the chance comes, it isn’t any different today. Kyle sat on the bed , I don’t think he expected this. He put it in his bag and sat on my bed. Nobody seemed to notice that my egg was rolling off the bed except Victini because a shriek came from her and everything went slowly and she dove, hitting the ground hard but catching the egg. My heart pounded as loud as a Dialga’s roar. Tears came to our eyes as I picked up victini and the egg. “Thank you Victini. Are you okay?”
“My wing hurts a little but I’m fine” I sprayed a potion that I keep handy in my room on her wing. “Better?” Victini smiled and we all agreed to keep this between us.
“Let’s go to the PokeMart!”
“Sounds fun,” Jonny and Kyle spoke up, “but we are broke”
“I have 3,000 PokeDollars, you can each have 1,000.” We all got up and let our parents knew we were off to the PokeMart. We ran as fast as our legs could carry us to avoid any wild pokemon though I had to carry Victini because of her wing. On the way we saw Rattata, Pidgy, and even a Caterpie! Once we got to the PokeMart Jonney ran to the Pokeballs with me and Kyle ran to the Potions. “They have a Quick Ball!” I love the Quick Ball, they help with pesky Abras. Kyle came back to us with 5 Potions. (“Overkill”)I whispered to myself. “Jonney, what are you getting” Jonney showed me the Luxury Ball in his hand and we walked to the counter.
“Hello, how may I help you three,” The clerk said “We would like these items.” The clerk gave us our items and I gave her the PokeDollars. “What is wrong with that Pokemon?”
“Just a hurt wing, I’m okay.” “Get well soon!” The clerk handed us an extra potion for Victini. “Thank you!” We all said on our way out.
“Give me your Pokemon!” An old man was being confronted by an oddly dressed man with an S on his hood.
“Never!” The odd man pushed the elder, took the Pokeballs that fell out of the man’s pocket and said “We are team Supernova!” While running. We all helped the man up and asked many questions but he had not one idea of who the grunt was.
“This is one of the many reasons we are becoming pokemon trainers! To stop people like that guy and Team Rocket! We have to get back home, stay safe!” We walked home with that strange man weighing heavily on our minds, not even worried about wild Pokemon.
Our trio made it home safely and swiftly ran inside. “How’s the egg mom?”
“I have no idea I forgot you were gone and haven’t checked.”
“Stay down here, if it’s all okay I’m going to come back down and we can watch Pokemon Rumble. Clever how they make a show based on toy Pokemon!” I ran up to my room and went through the door. It didn't take long for me to notice a slight crack in the egg. I grabbed the egg and ran through the door. Sliding down the stair rail doesn't always work but luckily this time it did. When I made my way to the kitchen everyone knew something was going on. Everybody gathered around.
“The egg,” I said. A bright light emerged from the egg as everyone said together
“It’s hatching.”
Thank you for reading this is my first fanfic so criticism would greatly be apprecieated.
I woke up to a gentle licking on my face. “Get down girl,” I said as I looked at my alarm clock. My vision is blurry from me just waking up as usual. I think my alarm says 10:00 so it’s not too late. I was worried I’d wake up late, I couldn't sleep last night and not just because I’m an insomniac, no today was something more than a kid’s average day. Today was the day that marks my status as a trainer because it’s my 10th birthday and I am finally able to get my first Pokemon!
I looked at my clock again and did a double take, “1:00! No, no, no this can’t be right!” I slung the covers off my bed not knowing Poochy, our Poochyena was still there, throwing her off the bed along with the covers. A yelp came from Poochy when she hit the ground. “Are you okay Pooch? I would never do something like that on purpose.” Poochy couldn’t talk because she was still a baby. I placed her on my bed and swiftly ran to my dresser, changed clothes and ran downstairs with Pooch on my tail.
I got to the bottom of the wooden steps and made my way to the kitchen. What a surprise… the kitchen is full of my friends and family. I sat down at the table while my mom got her camera. “Please no mom.” There is nothing I hate more than having my picture taken. “Let me get one picture then you will get your pokemon,” mom said.
“Fine”The picture was taken and from behind her back was something weird. It wasn’t a pokeball and it wasn’t a pokemon. Jonney and Kyle, my two friends, knew what it was yet I didn’t. “Wait is that a pokemon egg?”
“Yes and until it hatches you can’t leave on your journey, you can’t have an egg use bite,” She said with a smile. I thought my journey to be a champion was supposed to start today, but apparently she can’t let go of me that easy. I grabbed the egg and smiled, “I don’t know who you are but I love you… unless you’re a Dunsparce.” My mom shot me a dirty look and we got ready for the other gifts which were 2 pokeballs, a great ball, a bag, and a Poketech.
“What do you think it is Teddy,”Kyle said as he got his cake.
“Maybe Riolu or Zorua, it could be almost anything and I would be happy!” After cake Jonney, Kyle and I went to my room while our parents whispered, don’t ask me what they were talking about but I hope they aren’t talking about what the pokemon in the shiny egg is because I have ears like a Braviary. “So Kyle, what’s your secret Pokemon you said you got?”
“Teddy, so impatient, wait until our first battle”
“Jonney, why not introduce your friend to the egg?”
“I don’t see why not!” Jonny reached into his pocket and pulled out a pokeball with blue flames painted on it, pressed the button with his thumb. Kyle and I covered our eyes as a blinding light filled the room. Once the light died down we saw Jonney’s victini jumping on the bed and using his tiny wings to glide back down. “Hi Teddy! Kyle!” “Hi Victini! Want to battle,” I asked. Victini nodded and I ran downstairs to my mom.
“Mom! Can I use Poochie in a battle against Jonny and Victini?”
“Poochie are you up to it?” She nodded and we went out the back door to our battlefield.
Kyle offered to be the referee and we started the battle.
Jonny: Victini your up!
Poochy, win this!
Your move Jonney
Jonny: “Victini Headbutt!”
Victini moved in closer as I called for Poochy to use double team. Poochy did as I said but Victini still hit Poochie. (How?) I then remembered that victini was part psychic, it can sense the phony.
Poochy! Toxic!
The sludge hit Victini.
Jonny: So you want to play like that huh? Will-O-Wisp! Now we both have a condition, and must I remind you that your attack is halved while burned?
Grr I didn’t know Victini knew that move.
Jonny: Façade Victini!
“Dude, that’s weak! Quick attack Poochy!”
Victini’s Façade dealt even more damage due to the speed that they collided at.
Jonny: and with that burn it also does twice the damage.
(What?! I forgot about that! How could I be so stupid?)
Kyle: Poochyena is unable to battle, Victini wins this match!
“Good game Jonny, but remember, you have been a trainer longer than me.”
“Why can’t you just let me enjoy my win?” The three of us stopped by the kitchen on the way to my room. “Kyle, I left you something on Matthew’s bed, I think you will want it. It’s also keeping the egg warm.”
“Thanks mom.” ”I hope it isn’t a thunderstone. They make my hair stand up.” With Kyle’s long hair it doesn’t take much electricity to make it spike up. Kyle dashed ahead of us and made it to my room before Jonny and I made it to the first step of the staircase. “What is it?” Jonny was about as excited as Kyle but doesn’t run much.
“A-a-a Firestone. I have a book Evolutionary items lemme look it up.”
“A Firestone can evolve Pokemon: Growlithe, Vulpix, Pansear, and Eevee,” Jonny acts like he knows everything and tries to prove it when the chance comes, it isn’t any different today. Kyle sat on the bed , I don’t think he expected this. He put it in his bag and sat on my bed. Nobody seemed to notice that my egg was rolling off the bed except Victini because a shriek came from her and everything went slowly and she dove, hitting the ground hard but catching the egg. My heart pounded as loud as a Dialga’s roar. Tears came to our eyes as I picked up victini and the egg. “Thank you Victini. Are you okay?”
“My wing hurts a little but I’m fine” I sprayed a potion that I keep handy in my room on her wing. “Better?” Victini smiled and we all agreed to keep this between us.
“Let’s go to the PokeMart!”
“Sounds fun,” Jonny and Kyle spoke up, “but we are broke”
“I have 3,000 PokeDollars, you can each have 1,000.” We all got up and let our parents knew we were off to the PokeMart. We ran as fast as our legs could carry us to avoid any wild pokemon though I had to carry Victini because of her wing. On the way we saw Rattata, Pidgy, and even a Caterpie! Once we got to the PokeMart Jonney ran to the Pokeballs with me and Kyle ran to the Potions. “They have a Quick Ball!” I love the Quick Ball, they help with pesky Abras. Kyle came back to us with 5 Potions. (“Overkill”)I whispered to myself. “Jonney, what are you getting” Jonney showed me the Luxury Ball in his hand and we walked to the counter.
“Hello, how may I help you three,” The clerk said “We would like these items.” The clerk gave us our items and I gave her the PokeDollars. “What is wrong with that Pokemon?”
“Just a hurt wing, I’m okay.” “Get well soon!” The clerk handed us an extra potion for Victini. “Thank you!” We all said on our way out.
“Give me your Pokemon!” An old man was being confronted by an oddly dressed man with an S on his hood.
“Never!” The odd man pushed the elder, took the Pokeballs that fell out of the man’s pocket and said “We are team Supernova!” While running. We all helped the man up and asked many questions but he had not one idea of who the grunt was.
“This is one of the many reasons we are becoming pokemon trainers! To stop people like that guy and Team Rocket! We have to get back home, stay safe!” We walked home with that strange man weighing heavily on our minds, not even worried about wild Pokemon.
Our trio made it home safely and swiftly ran inside. “How’s the egg mom?”
“I have no idea I forgot you were gone and haven’t checked.”
“Stay down here, if it’s all okay I’m going to come back down and we can watch Pokemon Rumble. Clever how they make a show based on toy Pokemon!” I ran up to my room and went through the door. It didn't take long for me to notice a slight crack in the egg. I grabbed the egg and ran through the door. Sliding down the stair rail doesn't always work but luckily this time it did. When I made my way to the kitchen everyone knew something was going on. Everybody gathered around.
“The egg,” I said. A bright light emerged from the egg as everyone said together
“It’s hatching.”
Thank you for reading this is my first fanfic so criticism would greatly be apprecieated.