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Tyrantking6
01-30-2013, 05:38 AM
http://tyrantking6.tumblr.com/post/41844200269/nightmare-in-alamos-town
sorry the actual fanfic I made was 657 words too long so I had to move it to my tumblr Please read it and tell me what you thought and well tell me if I should do more for you guys :) also I would like to know If there was a part on this fanfic thing where there is no word cap because I didnt want to have to re do the whole story because of 657 words :c .

Cthulhu
01-30-2013, 05:44 PM
It's actually pretty good. You know with Genesect as the evil bad guy and stuff. My only point of critisism is that you made some sentences which are a bit weird like: "we walked to trough the street." Not trying to be mean but i'm just adressing it.

Tyrantking6
01-31-2013, 03:02 AM
It's actually pretty good. You know with Genesect as the evil bad guy and stuff. My only point of critisism is that you made some sentences which are a bit weird like: "we walked to trough the street." Not trying to be mean but i'm just adressing it. yeah I messed up on grammar in some parts I totally didnt notice that xD