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Tyrantking6
02-02-2013, 06:12 PM
Hey all following a prompt from some people about cleaning the threads up I am posting all parts as links this thread will be constantly updated.
part 1.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eS1WemqHOlcgwbqRpSLfSVbe7YfbfIQ3VEAW8G6-vDI/edit?usp=sharing
part 2.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L4ZX9nJ7a3a1DYK6zctLj3s1bK0_cJK1FbiY5RSAPfE/edit?usp=sharing
part 3.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_to2IA9eFXVdv3uCIEp-KPXrr1sbSm_uZFOROCo3VoM/edit?usp=sharing
part 4.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fshbfiDqSyd_086sP0qvKSfqjCRBHX21ysChd6pgfhU/edit?usp=sharing
part 5.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FsGd0CtjzZ5ZvC2dkoVSxrP815JfpdN1BuPtoAzWb9o/edit?usp=sharing
part 6 .https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bG4ZEn_r8KoQGnoqY1n-qnxmUobf_NGAdE7YywGon8c/edit?usp=sharing
part 7. (in the works)






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kiwi303
04-02-2013, 09:37 PM
I like it :3 though the only thing is that you forgot to put quotation marks when there was dialogue and forgot some periods at some point. At least in the first story

Tyrantking6
05-26-2013, 07:47 PM
yeah xD that first story was kinda first attempt type of deal