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V2412
02-23-2014, 01:01 AM
Hello, I'm Yamikanzi and in the real life I'm a (not bragging) pretty good writer. I can do all sorts but poetry always has been one of my weaker points. So this weekend I wrote this and have decided to post it on here to see what you all think of it. It's a poem about me and mostly how I see myself. Please R&R but if you copy it without my permission I will kill you.


I am who I am

Look into my eyes, tell me what you see,
Whatever you see I shall assume,
For I am whatever you make of me; a broken reflection
Even if I don’t move,
I will be lamented in the cracks of time
This isn’t what I want, I want to change and become someone
But how can a broken reflection possibly change?
What if I was able to move, if this me were able to change,
Perhaps then could my eyelids open and see myself?
Free me from this broken mirage,
Let me be myself, not a reflection
Are the words I am speaking useless; can the world see me unbroken?
So far it sees beyond me, expecting more
I am who I am, and that is it

starlightpichu
05-04-2014, 05:12 AM
That's great it leaves room for the readers own interpurtation and many can relate to it.