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SantiDC4
10-21-2014, 04:14 AM
Wrote this at 2 am, trying to think (forget) about a certain someone. I'd like to know what you all think. :o

Can't Forget What You Can't Remember

[Verse 1]
All the memories,
Those good times we had
Full of happiness,
They only make it worse.

And like a rose,
My eyes turn red.
I cry myself to sleep,
On the same bed
We once shared.
And now…

[Chorus]
I can remember the sadness,
Day after day
I regret my mistake.
Should I try to fix things?
I don't know anymore,
Wish things were like before.
But you forgot me.

[Verse 2]
I'm just tryin' to get by
With whatever hope I got left.
It's sad how it ended,
You're just a victim of theft.

You had a lot to say,
But I walked away.
Left the wrong impression,
And screwed up
All in succession.

[Chorus]
I can remember the sadness,
Day after day
I regret my mistake.
Should I try to fix things?
I don't know anymore,
Wish things were like before.
But you forgot me.

[Bridge]
And I know (I know)
That it'll never be the same,
Without your smile.

It was so long ago (long ago)
Yet the memory of you
Is just vile.

So just know…

[Chorus]
I can remember the sadness, (So vividly)
Day after day (It haunts me)
I regret my mistake. (I really do)
Should I try to fix things? (Nooo)
I don't know anymore, (I never did)
Wish things were like before. (Always do)
But you forgot me. (So easily)

I can remember…

But…

You forgot me.

NightmareRageMonster
10-22-2014, 12:55 PM
5 STARS! ;-; beutifuls!

SantiDC4
10-22-2014, 02:02 PM
5 STARS! ;-; beutifuls!
Thanks :,3

Eevee The Umbreon
10-22-2014, 05:04 PM
Thats amazing well done

SantiDC4
10-22-2014, 05:13 PM
Thats amazing well done

Yay, thank you!

Eevee The Umbreon
10-22-2014, 05:26 PM
ur welcome :)

Ash
10-25-2014, 01:29 AM
This is some deep stuff over here. Nicely done! Just add some music and come back again >.> lol

SantiDC4
10-25-2014, 01:36 AM
This is some deep stuff over here. Nicely done! Just add some music and come back again >.> lol

>.> Thanks, I will. <.< lol

Geo Sakuraba
10-26-2014, 09:42 AM
Should have video or cords :p but the lyrics itself are poetry, 10/10 good work

SantiDC4
10-26-2014, 04:54 PM
Should have video or cords :p but the lyrics itself are poetry, 10/10 good work

I know, I know. Just need to learn to play my guitar, but that's not happening anytime soon. :p