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SantiDC4
01-01-2015, 04:56 AM
I've been writing a lot lately, because it's a great form of expression, and because my friends love it. Well, maybe im just too emotional, whatever. I don't have a title for this one yet, but I'll let my band decide, or you guys if anyone has a suggestion. Here it goes:



It's been a while since I smiled.
Livin' the life of a psychopathic,
Static addict, but in the end
It became lit, and now I can,
See your eyes, under the cover of the night…

Let's watch the sun rise, every day
'Cause that's what I've been wanting,
And it's not a phase, but a delusion,
Of you and I, taking the broken way
Out of this place, that I like to call
Unbearable solitude, my only home.
So while we're here…

(Chorus)
Make up your mind, now,
Can't you see, that I'm in love?
The sun is out, but you're the cloud,
Blocking my chances and, how,
Did I get stuck in this rain?

And I know how you feel,
Damaged beyond repair, but I'm not the
One with trust issues. You compare me
To those who came before, like stars that
Moved on and died, left you scarred.

It's over, I fell for you!

Don't look at me, in retrospect,
It ain't fair, give us a chance.
Just shine your light, on my dark.
I'm tired of being cold, torn apart.
And it won't end, stuck in this mess.
Why are you so, indirect,
Solar flare?

(Chorus)

The Sun, the stars, the silhouette
Of you, give me life. And too much,
Is never enough, But you won't glow,
Cause this time, you're the black hole,
Eating away at my heart and soul.
Is this the end, for you and I?
Have we been forsaken by fate?
I don't even know, just wanna watch,
The sun rise again, but it's too late.

So please…

(Chorus)

Pikachu Belle
01-01-2015, 11:40 AM
This is beautiful.

Geo Sakuraba
01-01-2015, 02:57 PM
You should put this on YouTube. Its really great.

Velocity
01-01-2015, 04:26 PM
Wow. This is honestly amazing

SantiDC4
01-01-2015, 08:22 PM
T-thanks guys. We don't even have music for this anyway, so it'll be a while before it is performed.

Cynfire
01-01-2015, 10:08 PM
Very nice lyrics :3. I'd make music to it soon as you feel like it cus its very creative :›

NightmareRageMonster
01-01-2015, 10:38 PM
holy rhino on a bicycle this is awesome! Kudohs to you bruh! ^.^