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September 2nd ~By Sparky
You find yourself in a lit room. You recall this as your bedroom. Young child, it is your birthday, is it not? How old will you be turning?
>Thirteen
Thirteen, eh? The big one-three. First stage of being a teen. Now, what's the date?
>...Sept 2nd?
Oh yes! NOW I remember. But there are some things that still do not know about you. What is your name, child?
>Ryan Nisus
Oh yeah! You're Ryan! Well, Ryan...do you realize your birthday is a very special day?
It is the date of the FIRST COMING. But I can't tell you anything more than I have, or Venise will get mad at me...after all, I'm just an immortal being.
You hop your lazy butt out of bed. You've been sleeping a pretty long time, believe me, I got bored. I started playing your DSi. By the way....your pokemon suck.
...OW!
Probably deserved that. Now Ryanhuman, go get that phone over there. I believe it rings.
It is a friend of yours. Respond to the text!
RN: Oh hi there.
TD: Hiiii Ryannn
TD: How did you sleep?!
RN: Mmph....good. You?
TD: SILLY RYAN. I never sleep.
TD: *giggles*
RN: Hahaha, so funny.
TD: Is that some sarcasm I smell?
RN: Yup.
TD: Well, I gotta go. Catch you later, Ryan!
RN: Oi, please don't catch me. I am not a ball.
TD is now innactive.
Wow Ryan, you have a friend! What a suprise! I think the readers would like to hear about this TD person...instead of you, boring old Ryan.
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You find yourself outside with trash bag in your hand. Is ths the reason you disconnected with RN?
>Yeah
Orly. Well, I hear its your birthday.
>HOW YOU KNOW.
I just do. c: Whats your name...?
>Troy Denn
Nice name, even better then Ryan Nisus. Now take out that trash. So you can text someone...because your phone is ringing.
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WU: yo
TD: Hi Wade!!!!
WU: why so many exclamations
TD: I'm just excited! I haven't seen you in forever! Are you still in the ICU
WU: got released yesturday...
WU: i gotta go...bye
WU is now innactive.
End of Chapter 1~
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Sorry but I find this layout confusing. I don't know whether it's good or not because I'm really that confused.
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> = Answer
The story is told by another person who is watching them
When it says something like
YT: pancakes
Its a chatlog...
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Well Troy, I think you just got rejected by WU. Maybe we should check in on his life shall we?
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I'm getting tired of this whole introduction thing. WHAT IS YOUR NAME.
>Wade Ursa
UGLY NAME. IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY, RIGHT?
>Yes
OKAY THEN. YOUR PHONE IS RINGING, DON'T BE RUDE. JUST BECAUSE YOU HAVE A CAST ON DOES NOT MEAN YOU HAVE TO BE LAZY. WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?
>Fell off my bike into a manhole
TRAGIC. BUT, WHATEVER. ANSWER.
BC: W00h00 I 4m a tr4in!!
BC: Ohey, W4de..
WU: ugh its you. dont you have a life.
BC: 0H W4DE D0N'T BE LIKE TH4T..
WU: my name is not w4de.
WU: why do you even talk like that.
BC: I d0n't kn0w, why d0 y0u t4lk with n0 feeling 4t 4ll??
WU: its just the way you type that hurts my eyes.
BC: St0p being 4 l4m0, W4de.. I'm le4ing y0ur b0ring 4ttitude.. Bye!!
WU: good ridance. *blocks number*
BC is now innactive.