My fanfic Nightmare in alamos town

http://tyrantking6.tumblr.com/post/4...in-alamos-town
sorry the actual fanfic I made was 657 words too long so I had to move it to my tumblr Please read it and tell me what you thought and well tell me if I should do more for you guys :) also I would like to know If there was a part on this fanfic thing where there is no word cap because I didnt want to have to re do the whole story because of 657 words :c .

It's actually pretty good. You know with Genesect as the evil bad guy and stuff. My only point of critisism is that you made some sentences which are a bit weird like: "we walked to trough the street." Not trying to be mean but i'm just adressing it.

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Originally Posted by Regitoxin

It's actually pretty good. You know with Genesect as the evil bad guy and stuff. My only point of critisism is that you made some sentences which are a bit weird like: "we walked to trough the street." Not trying to be mean but i'm just adressing it.

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yeah I messed up on grammar in some parts I totally didnt notice that xD