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Thread: September 2nd ~By Sparky

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    September 2nd ~By Sparky

    You find yourself in a lit room. You recall this as your bedroom. Young child, it is your birthday, is it not? How old will you be turning?

    >Thirteen

    Thirteen, eh? The big one-three. First stage of being a teen. Now, what's the date?

    >...Sept 2nd?

    Oh yes! NOW I remember. But there are some things that still do not know about you. What is your name, child?

    >Ryan Nisus

    Oh yeah! You're Ryan! Well, Ryan...do you realize your birthday is a very special day?

    It is the date of the FIRST COMING. But I can't tell you anything more than I have, or Venise will get mad at me...after all, I'm just an immortal being.

    You hop your lazy butt out of bed. You've been sleeping a pretty long time, believe me, I got bored. I started playing your DSi. By the way....your pokemon suck.

    ...OW!

    Probably deserved that. Now Ryanhuman, go get that phone over there. I believe it rings.

    It is a friend of yours. Respond to the text!

    RN: Oh hi there.
    TD: Hiiii Ryannn
    TD: How did you sleep?!
    RN: Mmph....good. You?
    TD: SILLY RYAN. I never sleep.
    TD: *giggles*
    RN: Hahaha, so funny.
    TD: Is that some sarcasm I smell?
    RN: Yup.
    TD: Well, I gotta go. Catch you later, Ryan!
    RN: Oi, please don't catch me. I am not a ball.

    TD is now innactive.

    Wow Ryan, you have a friend! What a suprise! I think the readers would like to hear about this TD person...instead of you, boring old Ryan.


    - - - - - - - - - -

    You find yourself outside with trash bag in your hand. Is ths the reason you disconnected with RN?

    >Yeah

    Orly. Well, I hear its your birthday.

    >HOW YOU KNOW.

    I just do. c: Whats your name...?

    >Troy Denn

    Nice name, even better then Ryan Nisus. Now take out that trash. So you can text someone...because your phone is ringing.


    ...


    WU: yo
    TD: Hi Wade!!!!
    WU: why so many exclamations
    TD: I'm just excited! I haven't seen you in forever! Are you still in the ICU
    WU: got released yesturday...
    WU: i gotta go...bye

    WU is now innactive.

    End of Chapter 1~
    Last edited by SparkyThePikachu; 09-17-2012 at 05:01 PM.
    "I try and try but never succeed. I just can't meet your every need.
    You said it was real, like the American seal, but I then I realized.
    You're not worth my time."

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    Sorry but I find this layout confusing. I don't know whether it's good or not because I'm really that confused.

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    > = Answer

    The story is told by another person who is watching them

    When it says something like

    YT: pancakes

    Its a chatlog...
    "I try and try but never succeed. I just can't meet your every need.
    You said it was real, like the American seal, but I then I realized.
    You're not worth my time."

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    Well Troy, I think you just got rejected by WU. Maybe we should check in on his life shall we?

    - - - - - - - - - - -

    I'm getting tired of this whole introduction thing. WHAT IS YOUR NAME.

    >Wade Ursa

    UGLY NAME. IT'S YOUR BIRTHDAY, RIGHT?

    >Yes

    OKAY THEN. YOUR PHONE IS RINGING, DON'T BE RUDE. JUST BECAUSE YOU HAVE A CAST ON DOES NOT MEAN YOU HAVE TO BE LAZY. WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?

    >Fell off my bike into a manhole

    TRAGIC. BUT, WHATEVER. ANSWER.

    BC: W00h00 I 4m a tr4in!!
    BC: Ohey, W4de..
    WU: ugh its you. dont you have a life.
    BC: 0H W4DE D0N'T BE LIKE TH4T..
    WU: my name is not w4de.
    WU: why do you even talk like that.
    BC: I d0n't kn0w, why d0 y0u t4lk with n0 feeling 4t 4ll??
    WU: its just the way you type that hurts my eyes.
    BC: St0p being 4 l4m0, W4de.. I'm le4ing y0ur b0ring 4ttitude.. Bye!!
    WU: good ridance. *blocks number*

    BC is now innactive.
    "I try and try but never succeed. I just can't meet your every need.
    You said it was real, like the American seal, but I then I realized.
    You're not worth my time."

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