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  1. 10-27-2012, 10:48 PM #1
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    Smile Zombie Story

    Hey all, I recently started writing this, so I'd like to know what you guys think of it Any type of criticism would be appreciated https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...=h.lylat5vio8v
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"
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  2. 10-28-2012, 10:52 PM #2
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    OMFG IT WAS GREAT!! SCARY THOUGH ;___; xD!
    ok yeah
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    It's not done, so don't expect it to stay like that u.u
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    Wow... I could imagine myself in that story as that German Scientist! jk.
    I would be honoured to be in this story it's a bit like COD: Zombies... AKA AWESOME!
    And you should keep going for sure!


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  5. 10-29-2012, 04:17 PM #5
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    Thanks It's actually inspired by Halo, so yeah. :P I could fit you in, I don't have many characters planned out yet. Expect more chapters everyday
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