Gary I need some constructive criticism! :P
Gary I need some constructive criticism! :P
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O.O from me.....? Um... other than a few typos such as using 'you're' where you should use 'your' and a few other mispelled things that occur rarely, I cant see that ANYTHING is wrong with your story, Ella. It's... quite frankly amazing. The most original thing I've read here. I see absolutely no flaws honestly...
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ER.MAH.GERD. The second part is even better!!! SO AMAZING!!! <33
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Thanks Gary! I'm going to try and work on that! I usually just let it auto-correct >.>
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No biggie. I always have a couple errors in my stories too, even after proofreading, lol. Anyway, a seriously great story you have here. Nothing else like it on the site at all.
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*Gives medal to Venom*
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So far I personally feel your stories are being delivered beautifully and full of detail and consistently are an engaging read, promising more of the same from the next story. Don't have the slightest critique for this story in any way.
Aw thanks Gary! Not just for being nice, but for also being a great outlet and for being able to talk to you about both our stories! I feel like it's a really nice to be able to talk to you about it all :3
Everyone, a new chapter is out! Enjoy! (I hope everyone get's this notification, Gary :P )
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Finally got around to reading Chapters 2 and 3... WOW! That was some of the best description I have ever read on Pokebay. I love the way you detail yor emotions and I'm extremely interested to see how you approach chapter 4. This is only the second time I have ever done this, but... *SUBSCRIBES* XD
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Aw thanks Mr.Butters :3 It really means a lot to me, the next Chapter will be out soon so keep and eye out
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Yeah don't mention it. It's nice talking with you as well. I'm sure they'll get notification, lol. Or at least notice the new post from you (or me since I'm sending this message) in the creative repository. I have a strong feeling your story isn't going unnoticed, lol. Keep it up.Originally Posted by EllaJaneBinks7
Hey there everyone, another Chapter has been added to the story!
Hope you all enjoy it!
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Congrats in receiving over a thousand views and in such a small amount of time too! It took me aaaaaggggessss to get that! It's well deserved! Can't wait to read more!!!
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