wat type od fan fic do u want me to do

[Pikachu2000]

the title explains

[Umari]

I prefer action/adventure stories by its up to yiu

[Ninfias]

I'd suggest youd work on your other two fanfics that you abruptly stop working on before you continue to make another. Also I would suggest you work on your sentence structure, grammar, paragraphing, capitalization, spelling, ect., before you make another. I've seen lots of people give you great advice, Tor, you just need to follow it.

[The Kiwi Dragon]

I'd suggest youd work on your other two fanfics that you abruptly stop working on before you continue to make another. Also I would suggest you work on your sentence structure, grammar, paragraphing, capitalization, spelling, ect., before you make another. I've seen lots of people give you great advice, Tor, you just need to follow it.

I totally agree with Alyssa and as I said previously (Which it looks like you may have ignored...) you need to improve on every aspect... your writing methods are too confusing to make any real sense, so in all honesty I suggest not making another FanFic until you have improved on everything said by Alyssa...