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My fanfic Nightmare in alamos town
http://tyrantking6.tumblr.com/post/4...in-alamos-town
sorry the actual fanfic I made was 657 words too long so I had to move it to my tumblr Please read it and tell me what you thought and well tell me if I should do more for you guysalso I would like to know If there was a part on this fanfic thing where there is no word cap because I didnt want to have to re do the whole story because of 657 words :c .
My bug type gym is in the works It wont be open for a little while until I have my team readied up but when it is feel free to challenge me
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It's actually pretty good. You know with Genesect as the evil bad guy and stuff. My only point of critisism is that you made some sentences which are a bit weird like: "we walked to trough the street." Not trying to be mean but i'm just adressing it.
'Heaven knows where i'll end up - but it's a safe bet that i'll be never at the top of anything. Nor do i particularly care to be.' ~H. P. Lovecraft
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yeah I messed up on grammar in some parts I totally didnt notice that xDOriginally Posted by Regitoxin
My bug type gym is in the works It wont be open for a little while until I have my team readied up but when it is feel free to challenge me
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