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I like it :3 though the only thing is that you forgot to put quotation marks when there was dialogue and forgot some periods at some point. At least in the first story
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yeah xD that first story was kinda first attempt type of deal
My bug type gym is in the works It wont be open for a little while until I have my team readied up but when it is feel free to challenge me
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