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    So I wrote a song...

    Wrote this at 2 am, trying to think (forget) about a certain someone. I'd like to know what you all think.

    Can't Forget What You Can't Remember

    [Verse 1]
    All the memories,
    Those good times we had
    Full of happiness,
    They only make it worse.

    And like a rose,
    My eyes turn red.
    I cry myself to sleep,
    On the same bed
    We once shared.
    And now…

    [Chorus]
    I can remember the sadness,
    Day after day
    I regret my mistake.
    Should I try to fix things?
    I don't know anymore,
    Wish things were like before.
    But you forgot me.

    [Verse 2]
    I'm just tryin' to get by
    With whatever hope I got left.
    It's sad how it ended,
    You're just a victim of theft.

    You had a lot to say,
    But I walked away.
    Left the wrong impression,
    And screwed up
    All in succession.

    [Chorus]
    I can remember the sadness,
    Day after day
    I regret my mistake.
    Should I try to fix things?
    I don't know anymore,
    Wish things were like before.
    But you forgot me.

    [Bridge]
    And I know (I know)
    That it'll never be the same,
    Without your smile.

    It was so long ago (long ago)
    Yet the memory of you
    Is just vile.

    So just know…

    [Chorus]
    I can remember the sadness, (So vividly)
    Day after day (It haunts me)
    I regret my mistake. (I really do)
    Should I try to fix things? (Nooo)
    I don't know anymore, (I never did)
    Wish things were like before. (Always do)
    But you forgot me. (So easily)

    I can remember…

    But…

    You forgot me.
    Last edited by SantiDC4; 11-19-2014 at 06:55 AM.
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"

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    5 STARS! ;-; beutifuls!
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    Quote Originally Posted by LegendaryGodzilla View Post
    5 STARS! ;-; beutifuls!
    Thanks :,3
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"

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    Thats amazing well done
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eevee The Umbreon View Post
    Thats amazing well done
    Yay, thank you!
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"

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    ur welcome
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    This is some deep stuff over here. Nicely done! Just add some music and come back again >.> lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Makoto View Post
    This is some deep stuff over here. Nicely done! Just add some music and come back again >.> lol
    >.> Thanks, I will. <.< lol
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"

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    Should have video or cords but the lyrics itself are poetry, 10/10 good work

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nexus Razor View Post
    Should have video or cords but the lyrics itself are poetry, 10/10 good work
    I know, I know. Just need to learn to play my guitar, but that's not happening anytime soon.
    "And the ripped ones say goodbye. While the others meet
    Attached somewhere. At least they're shared"

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